analysis of rough cut

When beginning to edit our filming for the opening sequence we noticed that some of the story line was confusing as we didn't answer some of the questions in the best way we could or not at all. To ensure that we do answer all the questions we are going to do some extra filming in a grave yard so that the audience understand that the girls are two different people and only one of them is dead. We will also play around with the ordering of the opening sequence to see what order fits best but allows the audience to understand what is happening. Aswell as this we are going to add in split screen so that the audience can see how the two girls link with one another and so that we can get the idea across that one girl was killed and the other will be killed a year to the day.